The kick is definitely not pronounced enough IMO. Otherwise sounds pretty good. GJ.
The kick is definitely not pronounced enough IMO. Otherwise sounds pretty good. GJ.
Eh, not bad. Doesn't exactly sound like a "King's Relic" to me, mainly because of that odd instrument that kicked in at about 00:15. I think it was rather loud and rough-sounding compared to the rest of the composition. Also, that short section around 1:37 was rather unexpectedly loud in my opinion. Not trying to be overly critical here, just offering some feedback. Do keep up the good work.
i do agree with you there... ill work on that in future projects
Doesn't sound like dubstep to me. More like downtempo (ambient?) or breakbeat. Nonetheless, it's pretty good. A tad repetitive, but not such a big deal. Could try making it a bit more atmospheric, though, maybe by adding in some background strings or something of the sort. It could also could use a little more buildup and breakdown. Nonetheless, keep up the good work.
Alright man, thanks for the reply. I'll try adding more strings to it.
The idea isn't bad. But the intro was much too long and much too repetitive. I don't like how it basically did the same thing for 40 seconds straight, and to be very honest, I was getting kind of bored about halfway through. Try cutting down the length of the intro, make the buildup more dramatic, and maybe throw in some more instruments. It's a good start, though. Keep up the good work. =)
Not bad. There are three major issues I take with this, though: 1) It sounds a little on the rough side, even for dance music, 2) I found the changes in melody rather abrupt and jarring, and 3) I would have liked to hear a little something in the background. Other than that, it's good. Keep up the good work! =)
The melody is lovely, and the guitar was definitely a good idea. Nice atmosphere you got going there. The synths that kicked in at 0:28 sounded a bit muddy to me, but I guess that's kind of subjective. The strings that took over at 1:23 also sounded slightly off for some reason, and something sounded a bit dissonant in the background during the breakdown at around 2:50. Choir was a bit too quiet IMHO. I'm guessing that this composition is supposed to be rather relaxing, but I do wish that both the buildup towards the ending and the ending itself were a little more dramatic; I find that both were kind of flat. Nonetheless, good job, as usual. Keep it up.
I like the variations on the original theme. Maybe a bit repetitive, but I didn't find that a problem, partly because the original is fairly-repetitive, too. Some parts sounded a bit flat compared to the rest of the remix, but maybe it's just me. The only other thing that bothered me somewhat was the beat, which I found slightly annoying in some parts, but that didn't really detract from the overall listening experience. Good work, as usual.
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